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Stop mumbling into the blackboard and look your donor in the eye

13 Aug

imagesRemember the scene in the film, The Mirror Has Two Faces, where Jeff Bridges attempts to teach his class math, but spends the entire class mumbling into the blackboard? After a chat with his wife who tells him to talk “to the audience” instead of to the blackboard, he changes his method, looks his students in the eye, finds examples that make sense to them, cracks a joke or two, and sure enough, the students, for the first time in his class, pay attention.

Non-profits often mumble into the blackboard when talking to donors. So many direct mailers and brochures are written in the third person:

“The Sorcerer’s Stone Society helps individuals live for 300 years and longer.”

It doesn’t quite have the effect that this line has:

“Do you want to live for 300 years or longer? Join the Sorcerer’s Stone Society.”

When we talk about ourselves, but don’t bring the donor in, it’s like a RELATIONSHIP that only has I in it (two, in fact), but no U.

Let’s see how we apply this in real-life situations.

Just yesterday, we sent out an email newsletter to donors of a charity. The main point of the newsletter was to promote a social media campaign where a generous donor had promised to donate a certain amount for every Like, Share or Comment on a Facebook post.

The first email subject line that we wrote focused on the benefit (which is usually a great idea) – real change in the lives of boys in a charity’s hostel.

But then we asked ourselves, what did we want the newsletter to achieve? We wanted people to read it – and then quickly head to the Facebook page and like, share or comment on the post. So a more direct subject line was called for.

The first such header we came up with was:

Like, share and change lives: till Aug 23rd

It still didn’t have the effect of looking the donor in the eye and making the ask. So we changed it to:

Your chance to like, share and change lives: till Aug 23rd

Suddenly, the donor looked up and we talked 🙂

Bringing ‘you’ into the copy works not just in headlines, but in all your writing. If you want your donor to sit up and listen, use the word ‘you’. And watch the relationship grow.

How to raise funds, one word at a time

19 Mar

I CAN in the UK runs an ‘Adopt a Word’ campaign that provides a different spin on the sponsorship scheme. You can (excuse the pun), the campaign says, exclusively own a bit of the English language for just £15!

The campaign is brilliant in its simplicity.

    1. Search for a word to adopt: I typed in ‘happy’ for a start, and was told that I could own the word ‘happy’ for a whole year, for just £15! If I wasn’t sure about ‘happy’, the website offered me delighted, enchanted, rapt and cock-a-hoop as alternatives. How British. Charmed.
    2. Once you pay up, Adopt a Word sends you an official adoption certificate.
    3. Your donation goes to help children who have difficulty in communication.

We all want to mark territory. Turning this very human desire into a fundraising opportunity is a stroke of genius.

I CAN promotes the campaign through:

1. A separate website for the campaign


2. A very active Twitter presence with 7,239 tweets, following 1,849 people and with 2,297 followers.

Tweet we liked: If you are looking for a last minute Father’s Day gift, then you could always adopt him a word!


3.  A Facebook page that could do better:


They’ve put the word out on Youtube…


… and you get to flaunt it on your T-shirt or mug.

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The campaign has so far led to 4,683 words being adopted, raising £70,425 for I CAN (that’s Rs 56 lakh for you.)

Much more fun than writing a proposal, don’t you think?

But if you still think fundraising is all about proposal writing, I’ve got a word for you to adopt. Muggle. (It’s available; we checked.)

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